Tags : Am I A Rebel?
Before I was born everyone wished I were a boy;
Well, there I was born a cute little girl!
Then, was I a rebel?
In school when everyone wrote about dog,
As a favorite pet I wrote on a horse.
Then, was I a rebel?
When papa got me a beautiful red dress,
I threw it off for blue was my favorite colour.
Then, was I a rebel?
When everyone ventured into computers,
I insisted on taking up science.
Then, was I a rebel?
When everyone kept going out and enjoying late nights,
There I buried myself deep into work;
Then, was I a rebel?
When my parents found me a guy to get married to,
I fussed and got married to the man I loved.
Then, was I a rebel?
When my child never wanted to have food,
I forced him to have his food.
Then, was I a rebel?
When our kids wanted to lead life their way,
I felt a thorn in my heart and sulked.
Then, was I a rebel?
When our children left us in the wild,
I insisted that we weren’t alone!
Then, was I a rebel?
When after my death they would burry me in the cemetery;
All I want is to be laid in my backyard!
Am I a rebel?
I am tired of being called a rebel;
Doesn't it make sense to anyone, no ring on the bell?
All I wanted was to live life my way;
If only I was let to have my happiness sway!
© Jaysvimal
PS: Nope, Our's was not a love marriage... Just an imaginative write of a troubled soul
hi jays
very cool one dear. very cool one. In all that rebel thoughts...........I found something which most women like..........hmmm wait a sec...........let me count...........Forget the 28th line. The 29th line is interesting. Well Jay! If this is what you want.........Tell your hubby about it..........(yes its a censored A joke/prank on you, pls dont get offended, just for joke only)
P.S. You know what I started to count the lines to comment on one specific line. It was so BIG. I mean the poetry. So I had to copy paste, number it using bullets and then I got that line which I wanted to post my above comment.
Kutty
Jay!
I wud like you to play more such pranks (on me atleast)! Lets have some fun with words. I wont take you wrong.
keep posting your poetry and I will keep watching out for similar lines
Kutty
hi ladies and hi ladyKutty, Im going to confer upon you an award called BIG MOUTH AWARD. Its absolutely funny, hilarious about what you have said on the top, but I feel you must first ask Jay if you can be so with her......it sometimes can backfire....
jay i got to know this silly girl with a brown wig on her head (refer her photo) from this site....pls dont mind her....she's just not come out of her college days i guess
Nidhi,
I dint know Deepa Mehta has brought out a new film. One of her creations was called FIRE.
The other one is what you have said here......it sometimes can...... is that the new release of her :)
Kutty
:) Smiling right here Girls ;) Its been a while since I came out of college too.. But then no issues. Feel free to read them as you like...
thanks Nidhi for your thoughtful words too. and I do agree on that Award you gave to Kutty ;)
Am glad you guys liked it anyway
eyy i like these posts. im not regular ya. but i like this conversation. oh gawd, kutty, who is this lady. i keep reading all articles with her name around.
jaysvimal (did i get ur name right) u are not a rebel. you are certainly one of my kind. the lil diff is that you got wedded to a guy who came into ur life and i got done with the guy i was dating for years (now who is the troubled soul) dear we all are blessed. anyways thats an old story.
what do ya say! :)
may be u can make me too ur friend na. i think jaysvimal, nidhi and kutty are friends right??
my gawd, kutty, where do u get these from.........Backfire joke was damn good.
how do i send you a mail to reach you guys. pls help.
Lovely lines ...I see so much of me in u jays ( kutty now did i give u a one liner to build up on ;-)..). After all the talks and meetings on equality blah blah...its a man's world afterall...A woman is termed a rebel when she wants to live life the way she wants to...and a man ...manly ...That's life..
Take a chill pill Buzz,
Without us, men are nothing. Call them to do the house chores. They will do for the first few days, not to disappoint their woman.....After that.....they will start citing excuses.....today my boss wants me late at office (they will be partying at OPM, the driver will tell me :)) later they will say, Oh my! cant you stop working much. Much is the word which we have to ponder....they will be at their dinner table.....incase you are out shopping.....they will say where the F did that Salt Shaker go. It wud have been just beside them. They need that extra salt in their life to satiate them. Man needs his woman else.....everything will toss up.
I really cant REBEL with your ideas, but my MAN needs ME. Always and Allways ;) hehehe.....thats the Kutty touch.
Kutty
BUZZ
If I say I too need him, dont get more REBELLIOUS. Its still not MANLY.
Its pure LOVE.
Dont have an expression to show to you in the keyboard language.
Kutty
hey kutty,
im really surprised about the net search you do.
I liked the answer you have posted to Gaima on Yoga magazines. Looks like you are really worth of having got from me...............................................
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THE BIG MOUTH AWARD. You've got the flipside too! Those websites you had mentioned were really great.
Jay do you accept on my say?
Thanks everyone for your lively and funny comments.. theres life in this place and I love it..
Hydmango - I know there is not a troubled soul.. but the words come out when in frustration. ;)
buzzks.. -- ultimately it boils down to, thats the way of life.. there nothing like being called a rebel anymore...
Nidhi.. I second on that Big Mouth Award too.. Guess Kutty is having good time on hands that she comes up with so much to gossip on ;) I love her mythology tales for sure :)